FMP: Personal Evaluation

I began my Final Major Project by collecting a wide range of research from Primary and Secondary sources. I collected examples of illustration styles that I was inspired by from leaflets and music festival posters, and typography styles that I thought I could recreate. In my first research sketchbook that contains my three initial ideas, I collected cards and gift wrap from Paperchase which reflected the style that I wanted to work in for this project. I also collected images and photocopied pages from books that contextually influenced my project, for example ‘The Collins Pocket Guide to Stars and Planets’ by Ian Ridpath and Will Tirion, and the astronaut Chris Hadfield’s Autobiography about his time in space, which included his own photographs taken from the International Space Station and space walks that he undertook. Although my final motifs that I used in my surface pattern designs were influenced by secondary imagery that I saw, the Primary imagery I collected helped to influence my decision making and which direction I was going to take my project in early on. I used photography that I had taken of the moon, of rocks and crystals, and of an Airfix model I had of the Lunar Lander and astronauts. These helped me to define what I could potentially draw for my individual motifs, and inspired me to collect Secondary research to draw from. Although I am pleased with the amount of Primary research that I collected, I could have used them more in my project, and I should have used my photography to draw from at the beginning of my project instead of mainly drawing from secondary sources. I also should have responded more to the research I collected in my sketchbook instead of just annotating it, for example by drawing in a similar style or colour. I visited the Planetarium at the Centre for Life in Newcastle and saw a show about the Hubble Telescope, and I later revisited this research by collecting secondary research of photographs taken by the telescope, which I wanted to recreate using a marbling technique. My visual research is mainly contained in my first two research sketchbooks, however I took some photographs of the ‘BALTIC to the moon’ mural next to the BALTIC in Newcastle as I was inspired by the style of collage used and the fact that it was produced by my target audience, which I have displayed in my development sketchbook. I was also influenced by the collage style I found in some gift cards I bought from the BALTIC shop. I used this research to produce some collage versions of my line drawings, and although I liked this technique I wasn’t sure that this was the effect I wanted to work in. Most of my line drawings were influenced by secondary research from artists and designers, however I did produce some from the space themed gift wrap that I bought from Paperchase as initially I wanted to work in fineliner and watercolour, and I thought I could recreate the digital collage that the designer at Paperchase had used in my own hand-drawn way.

After I had collected Primary research I then started looking into the work of artists and designers that influenced my drawing style and the ideas behind my project. In my research sketchbook I began by looking at examples of stationery collections, especially notebooks as I thought that this was where the emphasis for my project lay. I also looked at what other artists drew as motifs to represent space, which later helped me come up with a list of objects to draw including spaceships, rockets, stars, astronauts, robots, planets and satellites. I then looked at the work of illustrators that I was influenced by stylistically. I looked at the work of Rachel Powell who creates playful prints for card and gift and interiors in the style and colour palette that I wanted to experiment with. I then looked at the work of Brooke Weeber as she produces a lot of the items that I wanted to develop, for example badges and stickers. She uses her hand drawn water coloured illustrations to develop into motifs which is the direction I initially wanted to go in with this project. In my research sketchbook I also looked at Lily Louise Scott’s surface patterns based on her small scale illustrations of people and quirky objects. Again, she works by hand and composes her pieces digitally, which is a method I wanted to experiment with and develop. From this research I began to experiment with using watercolour and fineliner in my sketchbook and, although I liked this technique it is the way I usually work and I wanted to develop another way of colouring up my pieces. After exploring some different drawing techniques in my sketchbook I chose to draw my line work by hand and scan in my artwork to refine digitally. I realised that I needed to do some more research into drawing figuratively, so I explored this within my research sketchbook and revisited it later when deciding on which motifs to use. I did some research into types of prints, for example conversational prints, placement prints, formal repeats and mirror repeats. I worked out that for my notebook covers and gift wrap I would use a conversational print as it is more playful and has a strong narrative feel, so therefore appeals to my target audience. I could then take aspects from my prints to use in the gift tags, invitations, stickers and greetings cards. Lastly I explored different ways to bind my notebooks, for example ring binding using wire, pamphlet binding by sewing with a running stitch down the spine, saddle stitching using a stapler and Japanese binding which is the most decorative.

From my research I then experimented with different drawing methods and materials to use. Although I enjoyed using watercolour and fine liner I wanted to try a different method of working to the way I normally work. I experimented with using collage in my development sketchbook which I think worked really well, however I wanted to learn new skills in Photoshop and colouring my work digitally so I also experimented with this. From my initial research into the Hubble Telescope, I experimented with using marbling to recreate the photographs of galaxies that it takes. To do this I filled a tub with water and poured paint onto the surface of the water, using a cocktail stick to swirl the paint around. Initially I used watered down acrylic paint which did not have the intense colour that I wanted and did not float on the surface of the water very well. I then tried using nail varnish which worked better, however I had to do this on a small scale due to the amount of nail varnish it used. The nail varnish also dried too quickly so I had to work fast or it would dry before it was transferred to the paper. I found that using spray paints worked perfectly as I could use a larger tub of water and dip A3 pieces of paper into it, which meant that the pattern created by the paint had more room to develop and spread across the water so it was more intricate, and I also had longer to work as it did not dry as quickly. After I had scanned my marbling with spray paint into Photoshop I experimented with changing the colour using the selective colour tool and adjusting the levels. I also tried using my marbling as backgrounds for the notebook pages and wrapping paper. I began to photocopy my marbling and collage it into my line work by hand, however I leant that I could do this digitally by selecting my line work with the magic wand tool, moving to the marbling layer, selecting ‘select-inverse’ and deleting the marbling around the line work. I also learnt how to fill in areas of my motifs with block colour by using the lasso selection tools, which meant I could offset the colour slightly from the line work. I revisited my research about different types of book binding and I experimented with these styles in my sketchbook. I found that although I liked the style of Japanese binding, it was too distracting from the notebook cover and it required a large margin or a landscape notebook as the stitching took up a lot of room down the margin.

I had selected the theme of space for my project as I had wanted to target my stationery towards younger children, and space was a subject I was very interested in as a child. From my experimentation I learnt that the more simplistic styles of line work worked the best, and that although I wanted to create a lot of my work by hand, once I had developed my skills in colouring up digitally, I realised that this created the effect I had wanted to achieve by hand. I am pleased that I learnt how to colour my line work using Adobe Photoshop as this is something I had wanted to learn in previous projects and is definitely something I will be able to use in the future to create my work. From experimentation I refined my motifs down as I didn’t want to include too many different objects as I thought this could get confusing, especially for my target audience. I refined this down to astronauts, space ships, rockets, diamonds and satellites, as well as including shapes such as triangles and circles. My tutor suggested I did some more research and experimentation with drawing figuratively and to maybe include animals as well as human astronauts. I decided to look at cats and monkeys as they were sent into space by NASA to test conditions for humans, and I thought that I could draw these in a more simplified style to suit my theme and audience. I hadn’t initially thought of using animals in my project however I think that it brings a more playful and fun aspect to my stationery and gives my surface designs more of a narrative, which works well for the birthday cards and invitations. I also developed my ideas for the colour scheme of my card and gift collection. I initially wanted to reflect the colours found in photographs of the galaxies and areas in space, such as deep blues and purples, and I wanted to create this using watercolour and white pen to represent stars. When I experimented with collage however, both digitally and hand-rendered, I found that I preferred block colours and purples and blues didn’t suit my target audience. I then created some colour palette boards in my development sketchbook, and found that I preferred the boards with a primary colour scheme, which I experimented with digitally. I am glad that I decided to change my colour scheme as I think that my final pieces would not have worked as well if they had been in the initial purple and blue colour scheme, and I think that the block colour works much better than trying to create a galaxy effect with watercolours.

For my final pieces I produced a set of surface designs reflecting the theme of space, which I was able to manipulate and apply to notebooks, gift tags, greetings cards, party invitations and stickers by using my motifs combined with my hand drawn type. I wanted to target my card and gift collection towards children so I experimented with my colour scheme and the simplicity of my motifs so that they were remained exciting and engaging but were not too complicated or messy. I also tried to create final pieces that were relevant to my target audience, which is why I focussed more on the party invitations and stickers instead of the badges. I tried printing my final pieces on the normal Xerox printer at college, however the greetings cards and notebook covers were too flimsy and the colour was not as vivid as I had wanted, so I experimented with printing on the Epson printer instead which worked much better. My initial three ideas were all illustration based, ranging from an illustrated recipe book, to stationery design, and a pop-up book for children illustrating the alphabet by using animals that represent each letter.  I think I have selected the strongest idea from my initial three ideas, as it combines the illustration aspect from each idea with stationery and card and gift design which is what I am interested in doing on my course at University. In my statement of intent I said I wanted to produce a collection of items appealing to children, that are exciting and engaging and that work together as a set. I think that I have satisfied this criteria as I feel that my final pieces are colourful and exciting, and by using motifs of animals as well as space-themed objects I feel that I have successfully targeted by card and gift collection to a younger audience. It was also said in the feedback from the final presentation that my collection looks a lot more professional and works well together, especially since I have printed the notebooks, cards, gift tags and invitations on the Epson printer.

In previous projects I think I have focussed too much on the presentation of the work in my sketchbook rather than the ideas and exploring a range of techniques crucial to the progress of my project. For my Final Major Project I wanted to move out of my comfort zone and explore different ways of working and presenting my work, which meant that I had to work more quickly in my sketchbook. I think that this was a good idea as I began to explore different colour palettes, working by hand or digitally, creating my own type to use, and experimenting with new ways of using colour, for example using spray paints to create A3 marbling pieces. I do feel that the presentation of my research in my first two sketchbooks could be improved however, as there could be more annotation and more drawing responses to the research that I had collected. I am pleased with the presentation of my final pieces, as I took care to use the eyedropper tool in Photoshop when colouring my motifs so that they all fitted together in the set. I also used the eyedropper tool when creating my different pieces, for example the cards and invitations, and changed the colour by lowering the opacity or adjusting the colour slightly. For my final show I want to display most of the final pieces that I have created, as I want my show to resemble that of a Textiles display rather than a Graphic Design one which are generally more minimal, however I need to be careful that this does not make my display too busy or distracting from the final pieces. I will print my stickers out onto A3 vinyl sheets and cut them out. I will also print rolls of wrapping paper and possibly wrap presents up with it to show what it would look like. I can then attach my gift tags to show how they work as a set. To display these products alongside the surface designs that I used to create them, I was thinking of using a shelf or a piece of string to display my notebooks, cards and stickers across the boards. I will also print some of my surface designs out to display, either at A3 or A2 size depending on how much I decide to display on the rest of the board.

During this project I have improved my surface design skills and my ability to use Photoshop to compose my designs and colour up my motifs. Although I was reluctant to work digitally, I learnt that I can still work in the style I want to and I can keep my work looking hand drawn, but I can clean it up and compose it on the computer which looks a lot cleaner and more professional. I am pleased with the skills I have developed digitally and I will definitely use this method of working when it comes to colouring up my pieces at University. This has also left me more open to using Photoshop and other digital software to refine my work, which I was previously reluctant to do. I have learnt to rely less on my hand-rendered art work, as it can be altered and improved digitally, but to focus more on the ideas and the direction of the project as a whole. I also learnt how to organise my time effectively and to stick to my time plan, and because of this I feel that I did not fall behind in my project and I was able to accomplish what I wanted to for the deadline. I enjoyed exploring new ways of working, such as using spray paints to create a marbling effect, and I may use this technique in future projects. I think that this project has improved my confidence in surface design which is what I want to progress onto, and has allowed me to develop new skills, especially in digital colouring and composing, which will help me develop my ideas faster and more effectively in the future.

Week 7 Review

This week I printed my final pieces and finished the annotation in my sketchbook. I had already tried printing my notebook covers and gift tags at home however the quality was not very good.
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I tried printing everything on the Xerox printer in the CAD suite, however I found that the notebook covers were too flimsy and the colours looked different to what they did on the computer screen, especially the yellow on the astronaut notebook cover. I then used the Epson printer in the CAD suite to print onto Matte paper, which captured the colours much better and was much thicker so the notebook covers and greetings cards felt more sturdy and more professional. I also collected a variety of different types of paper to bind inside my notebooks, as I didn’t want to stick to just lined paper or squared paper. I included coloured paper, squared paper, lined paper, isometric paper, tracing paper, black paper, thicker card and plain white paper as I felt that the notebooks would be more useful if they included different paper types and weights. I decided to bind the notebooks using thread instead of stapling down the middle as I thought it was a more personal way of tying my notebooks together, and I could use coloured thread to reflect the colours on the notebook cover. I used a long running stitch down the middle of the notebook because I thought that the Japanese binding was too complicated and distracting, and I wanted the cover to stand out more instead of the way I had bound it together. I also thought that I needed a simplistic way of binding my notebooks because of the wide variety of paper I had bound inside, and I didn’t want to over-complicate my design.

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Initially I had printed my invitations and gift tags on the Xerox printer and cut them out, however my tutors suggested that I display these on two pieces of A3 paper and print them using the Epson printer which I think has worked much better.

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I also printed out the surface designs that I had created and that I will potentially use to create rolls of gift wrap for the final show.

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For the stickers I combined my sticker sheets together to show how I would print these if I was creating working stickers. For the final show I will print this onto an A3 sheet on vinyl and cut them out to create stickers.

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This week I also began to plan for my display at the final show. I wanted to show some of my surface designs as well as the products that I made from them, so I was thinking of having a shelf or a piece of string across the display so that I could show my stickers, notebooks and cards. I am pleased with my final pieces, especially the notebooks, and I have enjoyed this project as I feel that I have had a lot of freedom to create what I would like to, on a theme that interests me.

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Week 6 Review

This week I continued to develop my designs and began the realisation stage of my project. I developed a hand drawn typeface to use for my greetings cards and party invitations which I thought was simplistic and engaging, but also easy to read. I then scanned this in and cropped the individual letters out, removing the background by using the magic wand tool in Photoshop.

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I finished colouring up my designs using the lasso tool in Photoshop which I really enjoyed once I became more confident with it as it allowed me to colour my pieces more neatly but meant I could still achieve a hand-rendered style. Once I had coloured up my first motifs I was able to use the eyedropper tool to use the same colours in each motif. I experimented with offsetting the colour slightly which I think worked well and it is similar to the way I would have illustrated my motifs by hand.

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I used my scanned-in marbling as backgrounds and to use for the helmets. I adjusted the colour by using the selective colour option to match the colour of my motifs. I then learnt to fill the helmets using my marbling by selecting the area I wanted to fill on the helmet layer, switching to the marbling layer and then selecting select-inverse and deleting the area around the helmet. I also experimented with changing the colour of my line work by using the gradient map option, however I thought that my line work was more effective in black.

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I experimented with using my marbling as a stencil and cutting out the objects from it in Photoshop, which I had done in my sketchbook but I wanted to learn digitally. After feedback from my tutor I tried overlaying colour into these pieces which I think worked well and I produced a set of 2 surface designs using this method.

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I also finished my surface patterns using the animal and astronaut motifs, which I will use for the notebook covers and to print as gift wrap for my final show. I experimented with using the marbling as a background and produced 2 more surface designs using a blue/purple colour scheme however I do not feel that these pieces are my strongest and I prefer the colour and the block backgrounds that I used for my 3 astronaut/animal designs.

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This week I also came up with designs for my greetings cards, gift tags, party invitations, notebook covers and stickers. For the notebook covers I used my existing surface designs and enlarged them so that they fit an A4 landscape frame instead of portrait, as I wanted my notebooks to be A5. I also came up with a design for a cover slip with some text to describe what my product was, using the type that I created for the cards and invitations. I did a test print of my notebooks at home and I found that I need to make the cover slip larger so that it has space to fit around a notebook and overlap at the back so that I can staple it together , which means I need to reduce the size slightly and then print onto A3 instead of A4. I also noticed that the positioning of one of my monkey motifs was slightly wrong when I folded the paper, as it left too much blank space on the front of the notebook, so I will adjust this. Next week I need to collect paper to bind inside my notebooks and decide whether to bind my notebooks using a staple or a needle and thread.

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To design the birthday cards I used the motifs that I was most happy with, and picked colours that I thought would go well with both the motifs and the rest of my card and gift collection. For the card with the number 6 on, I will experiment with using a hand drawn number 6 instead of a typed one as it doesn’t look right, especially as my type is hand drawn.

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For the party invitations I used the same motifs but included more type and spaces for someone to write their details on. I used similar colours to the cards, however I enhanced the colour of the red and changed the type to white so that it stood out more against the background which I thought was more effective, but the blue background was light enough for the black type to stand out. I also created a white border around the invitations which meant that I could position the motifs so that they were overlapping the border. Overall I am pleased with the party invitations as I was not sure how to position my motifs and the type, but I think they work quite well.

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The gift tags were relatively easy to design once I had created and coloured my motifs as they only included one motif which I mirrored in Photoshop to create the back. I will print these and cut them out by hand, and I will thread some ribbon through the top of each gift tag so that it can be attached to a present. I designed the gift tags to go along side my gift wrap, as they are made from the motifs that I included in my wrapping paper.

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The stickers were also fairly easy to design once I had coloured and refined my motifs. I measured the size of the document so that I could fit 6 sheets onto an A3 sheet of vinyl, so I designed 3 sheets of stickers which I will print twice. For my final show I will print these onto vinyl and then cut out the stickers, however for this project I will print onto A3 paper to show my designs.

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Week 5 Review

This week I refined my figurative drawings and targeted it more towards children by including drawings of animals. I chose to draw monkeys as they were one of the most important animals sent into space by NASA because of their similarity to human astronauts. I also drew cats, and aliens and robots to continue the space theme. I experimented with using collage in my sketchbook, however I thought that colouring my motifs digitally would work better so I scanned my line work in to colour up using Adobe Photoshop.

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I scanned in my line work and my marbling using spray paints and used the ‘inverse’ selection tool to cut out areas of my marbling digitally. I also used the lasso selection tool and pen tool to colour up my pieces using block colour, and I think that using the lasso tool worked best because it still achieved a hand-rendered effect and I was able to offset the colour slightly. Overall I am pleased with what I achieved digitally because I didn’t have much experience in colouring my line work using Photoshop and I learnt a lot of new techniques which I will use in the future when colouring my work.

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Week 4 Review

This week I began by creating some potential colour palettes to base my surface designs on. I think that the purples and blues work well within the space theme, however I would like to work in some variation of primary colours which I feel are more suited to my target audience.

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I also developed my line drawings to create my final motifs, and I experimented with whether I should use a black or white outline. Although I like the white outline against a black background, I think that I will use my marbling as a background or to colour the motifs, so they will look better outlined in black. My tutor suggested that I develop my line drawings further by using a looser technique, so I looked at the work of Conrado Almada, an illustrator I am influenced by, to develop this style. Although this produced a more expressive style, we agreed that for my surface designs the tighter line drawings would work better.

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This week I also experimented with using spray paints for marbling which was a lot more effective and produced a more intense variety of colours. During the group critiques it was clear that my spray paint marbling worked much better, and people liked the collages that I had made with my nail varnish marbling, so they suggested I could try this digitally by scanning in the spray paint ones. I revisited my figurative drawing by photocopying pages from my research sketchbook and I experimented with using collage which I think worked well. I was also influenced by a mural I found in Newcastle between the BALTIC and the Sage buildings, which was created by children from schools in the North East and I thought it was helpful to see what objects they associated with the theme of space.

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So far I think my project is going well as I have collected a range of different research sources which have influenced my project. I now need to scan in my hand drawn motifs so that I can colour them using Photoshop and compose my surface designs digitally. I also need to come up with a final list of pieces that I am going to design and make and incorporate this into my time plan. I think I am on target for this project as I have mainly stuck to my initial time plan, as well as revisiting my research pages. I have decided not to make the badges as I would rather focus on creating the notebooks, cards and invitations, and I can create the stickers using vinyl if I have time. So far I have mainly worked using hand-rendered methods and, while I have experimented a little with paper collage, the techniques I have used are mainly line work and pencil drawings. In the next few weeks I will develop my digital skills in colouring up my motifs and using Photoshop or Illustrator to create my surface patterns. I also need to become more organised and plan what motifs I will use, and what surface designs I will create. I also need to create a list of products to create and decide what kind of paper to use in my notebooks. I am happy with my progress so far and I feel that I will be able to stay on track and complete my project if I organise my time effectively and stick to my time plans.

Easter Review

Over Easter I expanded my research by collecting images taken by the Hubble Telescope, after watching a show about it in the Planetarium at the Centre for Life in Newcastle. I wanted to use these images to influence my marbling, and I tried using nail varnish instead of acrylics which worked much better for marbling. I plan to experiment with spray paint for marbling as well as I think it will produce the vibrant colours that I am working towards. I then experimented with collage by photocopying my marbling and cutting out my motifs, which I think worked very well and I will refine this technique to use to create my final motifs.

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Over Easter I also experimented with different methods of drawing, for example tonal drawing, line drawing, watercolour and collage. I like the effect that the continuous line drawing has, as I wanted to use a simplistic style as my stationery will be targeted towards children, however I didn’t want the motifs to be too abstract. I began to look at different styles of handwritten typography over Easter which I will develop as I want to create party invitations as well as notebooks and writing paper, so I will need to include some form of type.

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Week 3 Review

This week I continued with my research and experimented with marbling as a method that I could use to create my background. I used watered down acrylic paint and, although I would have liked the colours to be more vivid, I can enhance them using Photoshop. I could also try using nail polish or watercolour paint instead of acrylics.

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I also tried using watercolour paint to create a ‘galaxy’ effect in my sketchbook, as another potential background idea. I used a white pen to create stars in the galaxy which I think worked well.
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I began to experiment with drawing figuratively as I wanted to include astronauts in my surface patterns. I found that I could use the galaxy idea within the astronaut’s helmet to look like the background was reflected in the visor. I also liked the colours that I used to create the galaxy, so I used acrylics to experiment with different tones in my sketchbook.

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I also began to draw different objects related to space that I can use in my surface patterns. This is something that I will develop over the Easter holiday and I will use different methods of drawing to broaden my drawing techniques.

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I decided to look at party invitations and I would like to develop my hand-rendered typography style when creating these, so I researched into different styles of typography which I will further develop.

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This weekend I visited the ‘Robot’ exhibition at the Life Science Centre in Newcastle which helped me to collect more primary imagery of robots which I can potentially draw from.

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